I really liked this. It is very clearly about Hellstrom (your characterisation is spot-on), and I'm not going to lie, I was reading Landa/Hellstrom into it. Do you see what you have done to me, I'm seeing it everywhere now. ;p Also, I think you would be able to post it around on the comms, just because it is so clear that it is Hellstrom who you are talking about.

In other news, if you wanted to continue it, you could always have Landa blame Hellstrom for the contact not showing up. Landa doesn't really think it's Dieter's fault, of course. He's just frustrated because this contact had vital information, and now they may never find out what that information was.

Dieter, however, thinks that Landa is angry at him, and is oh so eager to make it up to him. He doesn't want to disappoint his... Colonel, after all.

It's just a thought.