ext_41494 ([identity profile] acidpenguin46.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] linndechir 2010-02-01 12:27 pm (UTC)

You know, I'm not quite sure if fluff is quite the right word to describe this. Sure, it may start that way, but once I finished reading it, fluff wasn't the first word that sprung to mind. There is a dark, sensual intimacy, a subtle telling of the balance of power between these two characters, that sort of, I don't know, not necessarily "detracts" from the fluff, but makes a little more darker than the normal sort of fluff.

However, I think I'm starting to ramble, so I'll just say that I loved this. And this line in particular...

It never ceased to amaze him how a brilliant, cold, steely mind like Hellstrom’s could reside in such a frail, boyish body, and yet at the same time it only seemed to be a fitting shell for such a beautiful intellect.

...is just gorgeous, and describes Hellstrom perfectly. Thank you. <3

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