This is lovely. Your descriptive words flpw beautifullt, and really provide a dark (in an angsty sense), simmering atmosphere. Reading this story unfold was an absolute delight.

And while I would love to see more, just because I love the way it was written, I'm not entirely sure if it needs more. It conveys the story perfectly just as it is.

Oh, and hon, don't worry - you can definitely write drabbles. :D