linndechir ([personal profile] linndechir) wrote2010-02-25 07:09 am

Five drabbles (RPS: Mark Strong/Hans Matheson)

My first attempt ever at writing drabbles, or anything really short for that matter. Feedback and criticism are greatly appreciated. I'm a bit tired of my rambling style, so I'm trying to get away from that, a bit. Does it work? ;) Also, does anyone want to see this continued?

Fandom: Sherlock Holmes RPS
Pairing: Mark Strong/Hans Matheson
Rating: PG
Words: 5 drabbles, each 100 words
Warning: RPS, slightly angsty
Disclaimer: As far as I know, this never happened. This was merely written for fangirlish entertainment.
Summary: Something seems to shatter in those blue eyes when Hans looks back at him.
Thanks to
[info]elenauial  for her help and suggestions. :D



Even when sitting, Mark exudes an air of quiet menace. There is something intimidating about his calm, composed manner, about his constant frown, about his piercing eyes. He does not need to be in costume to awe Hans as much as Blackwood awes Coward. And like Coward could not stray away from Blackwood, Hans feels drawn to Mark like a moth to the flame, hypnotised, unresisting, and deeply afraid to get burnt by these scorching eyes. His fear only intensifies the attraction he may never reveal.

Like Coward, there is nothing he fears more than being scorched by his sun.

-----

Mark likes to look at Hans. It is not so much Hans’ beauty that catches his eye, but what he sees underneath: a fragility that is barely veiled by his soft-spoken manner and his shy politeness. Something seems to shatter in those blue eyes when Hans looks back at him, and although Mark wants nothing more than to offer a smile and a comforting hand, he fears that he would only make it worse, frighten him, hurt him.

In his dreams, he places soft kisses on those shivering lips; in his nightmares he breaks Hans’ heart with one careless word.

-----

Robert cannot help but notice the longing looks and wistful sighs. Even from across the room he can see Hans’ lovesick smile and the soft gleam in Mark’s eyes, smiling even when his lips are not, but they are both sadly oblivious. Missing the longing looks that follow them when they turn away, so lost in their own yearning that they cannot see it is mutual.

Hans says something, and Mark laughs, even smiles one of his rare smiles - but Hans is already averting his gaze, blushing, and when he looks up again, Mark’s face is once more serious.

-----

One of these evenings, in a hotel bar, they end up sitting next to each other. Hans leans closer and closer to Mark to evade Robert’s wildly gesturing hands, so close he can feel Mark’s breath on his face.

Mark shifts on the bench to accommodate him, and they both freeze when their fingers brush. For once their eyes meet, for once they actually see each other, see the smile, the affection, the longing. Mark’s thumb draws a tender caress on Hans’ palm. Their fingers entwine slowly, firmly, refusing to let each other go.

Neither of them notices Robert’s smirk.

-----

They leave the bar together, although neither is sure who suggested it. Awkward silence when they reach the lift; standing in the empty corridor, facing each other, both men embarrassed, but still smiling. Hans takes Mark’s hand again, and all of Mark’s doubts are banished by the hopeful longing of that small gesture. He squeezes Hans’ hand, steps closer as careful fingertips brush messy dark hair out of his face. Hans has to stand on his tiptoes to reach him, to breathe a tentative kiss onto Mark’s lips.

It is so much better than any dream Mark has ever had.


[identity profile] cicia.livejournal.com 2010-02-25 09:46 am (UTC)(link)
Aw, this is great! I'd love to see more of it.

[identity profile] acidpenguin46.livejournal.com 2010-02-25 12:01 pm (UTC)(link)
This is lovely. Your descriptive words flpw beautifullt, and really provide a dark (in an angsty sense), simmering atmosphere. Reading this story unfold was an absolute delight.

And while I would love to see more, just because I love the way it was written, I'm not entirely sure if it needs more. It conveys the story perfectly just as it is.

Oh, and hon, don't worry - you can definitely write drabbles. :D

[identity profile] linndechir.livejournal.com 2010-02-25 02:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, I'm glad you like them! :D I definitely feel like writing more Mark/Hans, one way or another. ^^

[identity profile] linndechir.livejournal.com 2010-02-25 02:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much. ^^ It turned out that writing drabbles is really fun. Somehow I end up focusing so much on the technical aspect that I don't angst and brood about my writing, as I usually do. I think I'll just stick to drabbles now. ;D

Btw, do you ship Blackwood/Coward and Mark/Hans, too, or are you just in my fandom reading my porn because I'm just that awesome? ;D

Yes, I know what you mean. It feels somehow finished. On the other hand, I think I want to write more and pick up where I left this, and I really enjoy this "series of drabbles"-thing. Ah, well, even a nice finished story can have a sequel. Either way there will be more. ^^

*sends random hugs and a Dieterchen* :) And a Hans in the icon, because ... oh God, now my brain exploded at the idea of Hans/August. BRB dying.

[identity profile] deborahkla.livejournal.com 2010-02-25 10:29 pm (UTC)(link)
SUPER-angsty lovesick-gazing drabbles. Someone needs to illustrate these. I want to see big teardrops cascading down Hans' face, or at least big eyes awash with unshed tears. :-)

[identity profile] linndechir.livejournal.com 2010-02-25 10:42 pm (UTC)(link)
If only I could draw. *sigh* Hans is just so pretty when he cries. Ah, well, I will just have to write more. Although I doubt he'd cry in my fic, I want Mark to be nice to him, after all. I'm such a fluff-monster. ^^
Thanks for commenting. :D

[identity profile] piratesquared.livejournal.com 2010-02-26 01:18 am (UTC)(link)
I really love how subtle this is. The feelings seem to grow really naturally between them.

Plus its adorable that they're so clueless, really great! :D

[identity profile] linndechir.livejournal.com 2010-02-26 02:39 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! :D I find RPS always much more difficult to write than other things, so I'm happy that it worked out for you. :D

Somehow I loved the idea of them being so obvious and oblivious at the same time. And Robert facepalming because they're so clueless. ;) Thank you again. And your icon is the most adorable thing ever. ^^

[identity profile] piratesquared.livejournal.com 2010-02-26 02:40 am (UTC)(link)
Haha thankyou, I love his silly grin :D

[identity profile] linndechir.livejournal.com 2010-02-26 02:42 am (UTC)(link)
Silly grins FTW. I'm usually not really a Jude fan, but I loved him as Watson, and now I ended up liking him in general. ;)

[identity profile] auctorial.livejournal.com 2010-02-26 07:40 am (UTC)(link)
Such gorgeous drabbles! And I think you've written them exactly the way drabbles should be written: to capture these small, beautiful moments in such sharp detail. I loved them all. <3

[identity profile] acidpenguin46.livejournal.com 2010-02-26 12:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Drabbles can be really effective when you are trying to get the creative juices flowing. Hmm. Maybe I should write a couple, just to get me started (actually, that could work. I could drabble the fic I want to write, and then get to the fics I should be writing aftewards.)

It's just because you're that awesome. ;) I'm not adverse to the ship, in fact it would probably be my preferred Holmes movie pairing. It's just that Holmes doesn't really inspire my inner fangirl, who is the one who tends to ship things, make me create icons, etc. In any case, I will look forward to reading more.

*squishes back, makes Dieterchen convince me to write about his boots, in his own special way* Also, I like the way your brain works, re: Hans/August. ;)

[identity profile] linndechir.livejournal.com 2010-02-26 01:25 pm (UTC)(link)
I won't have much time to write next month, so I'm considering to do one of these 50 (or 100) drabble challenges for Blackwood/Coward. Like that I could write a drabble per day or something, when I don't have the time to work on a serious big story.

Yay, I feel flattered! I don't know, I also ship Holmes/Watson and RDJ/Judesie like there's no tomorrow, but I've always sucked at writing popular pairings, I feel like I'm stealing everyone's ideas. I like my neglected pairings. ^^ Unfortunately, unlike with Landa/Hellstrom, Blackwood/Coward have no chance of conquering the fandom, but when they're facing Holmes/Watson. ;)

Dieterchen: *approves of you writing about his boots* Lol, yeah, Hans/August would be awesome. Such sweet boys ...

[identity profile] linndechir.livejournal.com 2010-02-26 01:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! I usually have a tendency to babble too much in my writing, so I think this was a good exercise for me, I'm happy it worked out. I might just write more, and I'll definitely write more of this pairing, one way or another. :)

[identity profile] secret-smile19.livejournal.com 2010-02-26 05:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I like how the dynamic shifts from when they're characters to REAL PEOPLE. And the angst and missed glances and AGGGH. Tear out my heart, why don't you?

And epic LOLZ at knowing, scheming Robert.

[identity profile] rion-kun.livejournal.com 2010-02-26 06:43 pm (UTC)(link)
They're all beautifully written. The subtlety between them is adorable. And I love how you mentioned Mark's trademark frown.
I'd love to see more <3

[identity profile] linndechir.livejournal.com 2010-02-26 07:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Mark's frown is epic. I always squee when I see him smiling, because it's so rare ... and he does have a nice smile.

Thank you so much, I'm very glad you liked these. I think I want to write more Hans/Mark, although I'm not sure if it would be a continuation of this or something new.

[identity profile] linndechir.livejournal.com 2010-02-26 07:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Did I not put your heart back in in the last drabble? :) I'm very glad you liked it. Hans is just so perfect for angst. Especially for angst followed by fluff.

Yeah, Robert just sneaked in there, I was a bit surprised myself. ;)

[identity profile] sevenwindows.livejournal.com 2010-02-26 10:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Can I echo everyone above? You should absolutely write more drabbles, because these are lovely. I love their little longing, angsty moments.

[identity profile] linndechir.livejournal.com 2010-02-26 11:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! :D I think I will write more drabbles, I really enjoyed it - and it takes so much less time than longer stories. ^^

[identity profile] thatsleon.livejournal.com 2010-02-27 05:49 am (UTC)(link)
THE ENDING. SO ADORABLE.

[identity profile] linndechir.livejournal.com 2010-02-27 02:24 pm (UTC)(link)
:D When I realised that Mark was, what, 5 or 6 inches taller than Hans, I just had to. Size kink! Hans on his tiptoes is just too adorable. :) Thanks for commenting. ^^

Btw, do you mind if I friend you? :)

[identity profile] donatien1740.livejournal.com 2010-02-27 03:23 pm (UTC)(link)
I think Robert and his evil "wildly gesturing hands" has planned this all along *giggle*

[identity profile] linndechir.livejournal.com 2010-02-27 03:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Of course. ^^ Robert is a smart boy, he knows that Mark and Hans belong together. <3

[identity profile] thatsleon.livejournal.com 2010-02-27 07:35 pm (UTC)(link)
XD Poor Hans, he's so tiny.

And of course not! I thought I friended you a while ago (I think I've said this to EVERYONE from the B/C comm now. Apparently you guys are all so awesome that I just assumed. XD)

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