Yes, that's what's odd to me about this story. I guess I just don't see Blackwood as making such a misjudgment. Once the girl's gone I love the sex, though.
You definitely succeeded in making women seem icky to the point of being repulsive. ;-) That's why, although this could technically be considered a het fic because of the kiss, it isn't. For it to be a hetfic there's normally an element of desire between two members of the opposite sex, and that's not conveyed here, not even on the woman's part. And there's no het theme in the story. It's really about the relationship between two gay men.
Now write that one where a 16-year-old Coward seduces the older Blackwood. No more women to get in the way! ;-)
Re: What the hell am I supposed to do with this...thing?
Yes, that's what's odd to me about this story. I guess I just don't see Blackwood as making such a misjudgment. Once the girl's gone I love the sex, though.
You definitely succeeded in making women seem icky to the point of being repulsive. ;-) That's why, although this could technically be considered a het fic because of the kiss, it isn't. For it to be a hetfic there's normally an element of desire between two members of the opposite sex, and that's not conveyed here, not even on the woman's part. And there's no het theme in the story. It's really about the relationship between two gay men.
Now write that one where a 16-year-old Coward seduces the older Blackwood. No more women to get in the way! ;-)