OK, first of all, Jon really wants a threesome, doesn't he? I love how interfering he is.
I liked the way this played out -- that Stannis is such a complete basket case, and that Sansa is so traumatized that she's terrified by everything, and yet they sort of work. It's very one-step-forward-two-steps-back but you do give the sense that they are making progress, and will continue to make progress. The sex was actually better than I thought it would be from your author's note: in a way it helps that Sansa has the kind of old-fashioned ideas she does, and that Stannis is clearly trying hard to, uh, do his duty here.
I think your Sansa is very plausible here -- she's so used to being a victim that it's hard for her to trust anyone. I liked that, and the fact that it is still there at the end of the scene, a little, and the language she uses ("lovely" and "magical"! I also liked Stannis' response there!)
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Date: 2012-03-15 10:25 pm (UTC)OK, first of all, Jon really wants a threesome, doesn't he? I love how interfering he is.
I liked the way this played out -- that Stannis is such a complete basket case, and that Sansa is so traumatized that she's terrified by everything, and yet they sort of work. It's very one-step-forward-two-steps-back but you do give the sense that they are making progress, and will continue to make progress. The sex was actually better than I thought it would be from your author's note: in a way it helps that Sansa has the kind of old-fashioned ideas she does, and that Stannis is clearly trying hard to, uh, do his duty here.
I think your Sansa is very plausible here -- she's so used to being a victim that it's hard for her to trust anyone. I liked that, and the fact that it is still there at the end of the scene, a little, and the language she uses ("lovely" and "magical"! I also liked Stannis' response there!)