Had a quick read (will go back and re-read and review soooon), and I think it is good! You've done really well with what, I know, was a difficult scene to write. It is also packed with little tidbits of interesting character development which I really like. The brief scenes between Artemis and Drizzt were actually really well done, and I liked the references to Jarlaxle and Zak's relationship which (I've always found) to be fascinating (the hat, hah!).
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Date: 2009-02-11 10:01 pm (UTC)So well done! :)