Well well well First of all - you know I love it. Yes. I love the wording and the characterization, so apt and vivid. And yes, a fifteen minutes' wait out in the cold can be most frustrating. Then, finally, the ending note made me giggle a bit, it was kind of unexpected. Well-done, I say. <3
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Date: 2009-11-17 12:08 am (UTC)First of all - you know I love it. Yes. I love the wording and the characterization, so apt and vivid. And yes, a fifteen minutes' wait out in the cold can be most frustrating. Then, finally, the ending note made me giggle a bit, it was kind of unexpected. Well-done, I say. <3