linndechir

This is really quite lovely, and you do yourself a great injustice by calling it "profoundly unsexy" when it is anything but. I'm pleased to see you take a stab at het smut (although I'm not at all sure this deserves to be called smut). The writing is simple, to the point, and yet graceful and eloquent. You succeed in creating a believable interlude between two very interesting characters. Best of all Sansa comes across as strong and as powerful in her own way as Stannis is in his.

I'm not at all surprised by the exceptional quality of your very first het fic. I always knew you had it in you to write effective het fic, even though you may not like reading it.