OMG THIS IS SOUNDING AWESOME. And I agree with your other commenter in that I really enjoy how you write Drizzt. He acts more like his age, for one thing, rather than the grand sage of the ages. And Zak really needs to slag him for that at least once:D And OMG writing the scene with CB will be great--not because I like her, but because the more people that find out about Zak/Artemis, the more hilarious it will be. At least to me:) And while she might not have much character of her own, she's a very good 'soundingboard' character, because Drizzt always expresses his opinions to her in full.

...suddenly I feel very sorry for her. ;P